tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post8308478937178545909..comments2023-10-26T08:46:14.502-05:00Comments on MUSCLE MACHINE: HARDBODY - chapter 11 (official version)Mr.Shhhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-8049387979692204712016-08-02T20:00:13.226-05:002016-08-02T20:00:13.226-05:00hollister, wedding dresses, louboutin, new balance...<a href="http://www.abercrombiehollister.it/" rel="nofollow">hollister</a>, <a href="http://www.cheap-wedding-dresses.org/" rel="nofollow">wedding dresses</a>, <a href="http://www.christian--louboutin.it/" rel="nofollow">louboutin</a>, <a href="http://www.newbalance-shoes.in.net/" rel="nofollow">new balance shoes</a>, <a href="http://www.lululemonoutlets.in.net/" rel="nofollow">lululemon</a>, <a href="http://www.the-north-face.in.net/" rel="nofollow">north face outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.abercrombie-andfitch.us.com/" rel="nofollow">abercrombie and fitch</a>, <a href="http://www.converse--shoes.com/" rel="nofollow">converse outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.chiflatiron.cn.com/" rel="nofollow">chi flat iron</a>, <a href="http://www.mcm-handbags.net/" rel="nofollow">mcm handbags</a>, <a href="http://www.nikeair-max.it/" rel="nofollow">nike air max</a>, <a href="http://www.valentino-shoes.us.com/" rel="nofollow">valentino shoes</a>, <a href="http://www.hollister-abercrombie.es/" rel="nofollow">hollister</a>, <a href="http://www.baseball-bats.us/" rel="nofollow">baseball bats</a>, <a href="http://www.beatsbydrdreheadphones.in.net/" rel="nofollow">beats by dre</a>, <a href="http://www.herveleger.us/" rel="nofollow">herve leger</a>, <a href="http://www.borse--gucci.it/" rel="nofollow">gucci</a>, <a href="http://www.instylerionicstyler.us.com/" rel="nofollow">instyler</a>, <a href="http://www.longchampbags.org.uk/" rel="nofollow">longchamp uk</a>, <a href="http://www.jimmy-choo-shoes.us.com/" rel="nofollow">jimmy choo outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.hermesbirkinbags.com.co/" rel="nofollow">hermes belt</a>, <a href="http://www.babyliss.in.net/" rel="nofollow">babyliss</a>, <a href="http://www.soccerjerseys.com.co/" rel="nofollow">soccer jerseys</a>, <a href="http://www.soccer--shoes.net/" rel="nofollow">soccer shoes</a>, <a href="http://www.vans-shoes-outlet.com/" rel="nofollow">vans outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.timberland-boots.us/" rel="nofollow">timberland boots</a>, <a href="http://www.occhiali-oakley.it/" rel="nofollow">oakley</a>, <a href="http://www.maccosmeticsoutlet.us/" rel="nofollow">mac cosmetics</a>, <a href="http://www.nfljerseys-cheap.us.com/" rel="nofollow">nfl jerseys</a>, <a href="http://www.ferragamo-shoes.net/" rel="nofollow">ferragamo shoes</a>, <a href="http://www.nike-airmax.nl/" rel="nofollow">nike air max</a>, <a href="http://www.p90x3workout.us.com/" rel="nofollow">p90x workout</a>, <a href="http://www.asicso.com/" rel="nofollow">asics running shoes</a>, <a href="http://www.nike-trainers-uk.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">nike trainers uk</a>, <a href="http://www.vans-scarpe.it/" rel="nofollow">vans</a>, <a href="http://www.the-northfaceoutlet.us.com/" rel="nofollow">north face outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.phone-cases.us.com/" rel="nofollow">iphone cases</a>, <a href="http://www.reebok-outlet.in.net/" rel="nofollow">reebok outlet</a>, <a href="http://www.rayban--occhiali.it/" rel="nofollow">ray ban</a>, <a href="http://www.nikerosherun.net/" rel="nofollow">nike roshe run</a>, <a href="http://www.hollister-clothingstore.us.com/" rel="nofollow">hollister clothing</a>, <a href="http://www.nike-air-huarache.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">nike huaraches</a>, <a href="http://www.ralph-lauren-outlet.it/" rel="nofollow">ralph lauren</a>, <a href="http://www.celine-handbags.org/" rel="nofollow">celine handbags</a>, <a href="http://www.ghd-hairstraighteners.org.uk/" rel="nofollow">ghd hair</a>, <a href="http://www.saclancelpascher.fr/" rel="nofollow">lancel</a>, <a href="http://www.insanityworkout.in.net/" rel="nofollow">insanity workout</a>, <a href="http://www.converseallstar.it/" rel="nofollow">converse</a>, <a href="http://www.mont-blanc-pens.us.com/" rel="nofollow">mont blanc pens</a>, <a href="http://www.bottegaveneta-handbagsoutlet.com/" rel="nofollow">bottega veneta</a>oakleyseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02221561593432696548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-35649185979805978052013-12-18T02:56:21.230-05:002013-12-18T02:56:21.230-05:00Well it's been a year since the last chapter.....Well it's been a year since the last chapter... :(AbyssPlanetnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-33822640833637079642012-12-03T22:12:22.796-05:002012-12-03T22:12:22.796-05:00Mr. Shhh;
Love the new Jenna story. This is why I ...Mr. Shhh;<br />Love the new Jenna story. This is why I check your page every few days, just hoping for a new installment.<br />Thanks!<br />-EclecticPRAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-40033615203711378172012-12-03T08:34:08.295-05:002012-12-03T08:34:08.295-05:00Very glad to have you back after a long absence. M...Very glad to have you back after a long absence. My opinion, if Hardbody series ends it seems to me that Jenna has to show all that she could and more and speak to the bodybuilding contest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-7642394693752892202012-12-02T17:44:14.810-05:002012-12-02T17:44:14.810-05:00Just to clarify I was the "anonymous" th...Just to clarify I was the "anonymous" that you were responding to, I just totally forgot to sign my post, haha.<br /><br />At any rate I wouldn't be opposed to a unified "universe", although something to consider is how much any of the characters might steal the spotlight from the others. Like with "The Club" where the whole point is to have the biggest of the big be the "best", it makes sense to have Jenna show up and "win". But if it's just a regular story where, say, Razor is the main character, if she's existing in a world where bigger is universally better, and she exists in the same universe as Mercy, Tanya, and Jenna, why would anyone care about her?<br /><br />Frankly since you've established that Mercy operates in a reality where femuscle rules supreme, it might be better to keep her separate even if you unify the rest. Like, there really isn't anything in your stories indicating that Tanya, Krissy, or any of the others really exist in such a world. Their stories still seem to take place in "the real world", one where there's people who like femuscle (and even extreme femuscle), but by and large it's a far, far cry from mainstream.<br /><br />As for Brawna, I've got no idea what's up with it. It worked briefly for me last night, but it's been down ever since.<br /><br />But seriously you and thesabre should collaborate on a Jenna/Sarah crossover story.AbyssPlanetnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-81121670207702497222012-12-02T12:10:37.752-05:002012-12-02T12:10:37.752-05:00Lorddaroth and anon, it's funny you guys menti...Lorddaroth and anon, it's funny you guys mention both The Club and the Monstra name drop. I've been meaning to express my thoughts on a related subject for a while. Originally, The Club was meant to be a fun, non-cannon way of bringing a bunch of my characters together in one story. Since then though, I've been considing the idea of unifying the "Muscle Machine" universe so that everthing take place in one official continuity. As I see it, the Muscle Machine version of America is an alternate reality where bodybuilding is a national obession and muscular women are considered the ultimate sex symbols. One cohesive universe could open up all sorts of cool possibilities. Tanya Daniels could get an afterschool job working for madetoordermuscle.com, or Lt. Cronenweth could have a mission that takes place at the 2012 Ms. Testosterone where Monstra is competing. Ironically, the only story series that doesn't fit into such a universe is Hardbody, since big, bulging Jenna would be seen a super-babe and not a freakshow. The only answer I've got to that problem is that Jenna lives in a highly conservative part of the country which shuns the mainstream sexualization of female muscle. What do you guys think?<br /><br />As for how The Club is going to end - I did have a conclusion in mind when I started it but I often change things as the story progresses. Right now I'm waiting for a few ideas to come together before I attempt to wrap it up. <br /><br />Anon, you also mention theSabre's Muscle Sex story. Thesabre is my personal favorite fem-muscle writer and I would soil my pants (in happiness) if he ever took a shot writing one of my characters. <br /><br />Hey, does anyone know the deal with Brawna.org? I really hope that site isn't gone for good! Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-82300167464000744062012-12-02T05:47:33.356-05:002012-12-02T05:47:33.356-05:00Absolutely amazing! It was a looooong wait between...Absolutely amazing! It was a looooong wait between chapters, but I daresay it was worth it. I loved the Monstra namedrop too.<br /><br />Also I can't help but wonder what would happen if Jenna met Sarah and her boyfriend from thesabre's "Muscle Sex" series...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-53229056090426596102012-12-01T09:53:53.516-05:002012-12-01T09:53:53.516-05:00amazing as always. not sure what's happening w...amazing as always. not sure what's happening with brawna but the site is down just now.kander74https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037501403043742807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-68340780731875062932012-12-01T02:25:22.505-05:002012-12-01T02:25:22.505-05:00You know what? I fear for the future (conclusion?)...You know what? I fear for the future (conclusion?) of 'The Club' story.<br /><br />The first chapters hinted that something so crazy is coming words can't even begin to describe it.<br /><br />If we can believe the foreshadowing (he gets all three girls)... Well, I fear nobody could write the orgy that would follow.lorddarothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09034764276457177216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-51810923643716067902012-11-29T21:26:42.936-05:002012-11-29T21:26:42.936-05:00Thanks for the support everyone, and I'm glad ...Thanks for the support everyone, and I'm glad you enjoyed the new story. Believe it or not, I've been futzing with it on and off for over a year. It's funny how some ideas arrive fully-formed (and get written in a veritable whirl wind) while others refuse to come together without a fight. For whatever reason, this particular chapter was a struggle. <br /><br />In regards to the older "shopping" chapters, I'll try to upload them here or on Brawna.org. Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-87788327938296454292012-11-29T18:06:21.537-05:002012-11-29T18:06:21.537-05:00OMG!! I've been waiting forEVER for the next i...OMG!! I've been waiting forEVER for the next installment, the chapters of Jenna shopping are no longer available, oh please please please post some more; and if at all possible could you post the chapters that we can't download anymore? <br />Awesome, just bloody awesome. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-79335938330342077002012-11-29T17:15:03.659-05:002012-11-29T17:15:03.659-05:00I think your writing has actually improved since y...I think your writing has actually improved since your last story, and you were already one of the best writers in the female muscle fiction scene. Keep up the great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-62685157049713337552012-11-29T01:03:52.541-05:002012-11-29T01:03:52.541-05:00Wow, I didn't expect this when I woke up today...Wow, I didn't expect this when I woke up today.<br /><br />You already made my daylorddarothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09034764276457177216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-22545183272544437452012-11-28T23:22:37.002-05:002012-11-28T23:22:37.002-05:00Well I'll be damned, the man is still alive! A...Well I'll be damned, the man is still alive! And it's great that you came back with this incredible chapter of Hardbody, I mean Jenna Steele was almost the very first character of yours that really blew my mind. (Not the absolute first, Tina Brody from Battle of the Sexes was first, but Jenna was #2.) And seeing her grow even bigger, more ripped, and stronger is just an experience, it's an event. To me, it was very much worth the wait, I can only hope that your next story comes out sooner though. shaneomacfan3https://www.blogger.com/profile/05918494684201735799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-12300206954317720712012-11-28T12:00:28.106-05:002012-11-28T12:00:28.106-05:00Yes! Triples yes! Finally a new chapter of this am...Yes! Triples yes! Finally a new chapter of this amazing story...<br />Mate, you're so talented. Every time I read one of your story, my heart is beating, my stomach make knots... As I was saying, it's like you're going deep into my mind to find somme perverted images I even never thought about...Ozzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550138917299947614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-9179605587925921132012-11-28T09:55:59.506-05:002012-11-28T09:55:59.506-05:00I'm stunned about your latest installment as w...I'm stunned about your latest installment as well as really happy to see you still active here. As always the result was worth the wait . Thanks so much for this new chapterayanamifanhttp://ayanamifan.deviantart.comnoreply@blogger.com