tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post7892086013337642371..comments2023-10-26T08:46:14.502-05:00Comments on MUSCLE MACHINE: HARDBODY - chapter 10Mr.Shhhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-37842090045647622602011-05-10T21:53:17.505-05:002011-05-10T21:53:17.505-05:00Still waiting for the next chapter.Still waiting for the next chapter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-48210660775061971772011-01-13T11:22:40.451-05:002011-01-13T11:22:40.451-05:00Thanks! :D
I read your stories with great passion,...Thanks! :D<br />I read your stories with great passion, and I'll say if I think there is anything that can be even better.<br />I think I have not read the chapters 5-8. 1-4 are on brawna.org, and I can't seem to be able to open the compilation offered on this site. Last I remembered, Jenna used to be 16, and perhaps some time has passed during chapters 5-9, without me noticing, so I was just a little bit surprised when Jenna was suddenly 18 in chapter 10, haha.<br /><br />But having to lift three times as heavy (perhaps more? :D), working out non stop, and maxing out on every single exercise, must no doubt make Jenna put herself through at least a ten times as painful hell as she has ever been to previously, even at her most extreme *blush*<br /><br />I don't know if you're open for ideas and input for the story itself, but I just have this fantasy I can't seem to shake off. What if a mysterious new girl started at the school, a little younger than Jenna, but much, much, much more muscular?Petter Falch Rasmussennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-6959421002158445972011-01-11T12:06:58.955-05:002011-01-11T12:06:58.955-05:00You've made some very astute observations Pett...You've made some very astute observations Petter (though only 2 weeks have passed between chapter 9 and 10, not 2 years). I've always been attracted to the will and drive of female athletes and Jenna is the epitome of this concept. Effortless muscle and strength are not my thing, I like women who have to fight for it. I'll make sure to keep that notion at the forefront as I finish the next chapter (I swear to God I WILL update this site eventually).Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-83127446316111172582010-12-13T22:14:05.208-05:002010-12-13T22:14:05.208-05:00It's still great, but I feel it has lost some ...It's still great, but I feel it has lost some of its dark feeling. Whereas most muscle stories are very happy go lucky, I liked that this also had parts focusing on the torture and sacrifices Jenna must make for her obsession, and how hard it was for her when someone said they thought she wasn't muscular enough, showing off a deranged, little girl, actually. Stuff like that (that gives it a somewhat realistic flavor, and I do enjoy when I can almost feel the torture these extremely muscular girls endureø). I felt chapter 9 really laid the ground for even more of that. With Jenna it was intense). I felt chapter 9 really laid the groundworks for even more of this, where she needs to grow thrice as big in only weeks, and all of a sudden chapter ten has skipped two years, and Jenna seems like just your average shy, but happy girl (with a divine body, of course, but nothing that makes me feel it).<br />A body like hers is gonna cost, and the price paid is part of the reward, I think :DPetter Falch Rasmussennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-46388168810961596762010-08-31T23:32:24.601-05:002010-08-31T23:32:24.601-05:00When might we see the next chapter of this, or The...When might we see the next chapter of this, or The Club, or Made to Order? I can't wait to see how these continue. Keep up the great work Mr.ShhhAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-25858251235569748622010-07-08T15:05:21.442-05:002010-07-08T15:05:21.442-05:00Much thanks, Diten. Glad you liked it.Much thanks, Diten. Glad you liked it.Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-24399348331716281002010-07-06T17:26:17.511-05:002010-07-06T17:26:17.511-05:00Hoooray, I was just glad to see you still writing,...Hoooray, I was just glad to see you still writing, but more hardbody, bless my stars, this is amazing, keep up the spectacular work<br />-DitenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-41278914672564793902010-05-05T19:18:26.306-05:002010-05-05T19:18:26.306-05:00Thanks for the notes, ayanamifan. I'll send y...Thanks for the notes, ayanamifan. I'll send you an email.Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-82103876114268658152010-05-05T13:20:02.118-05:002010-05-05T13:20:02.118-05:00Ah i am very happy youre bringing the hardbodies s...Ah i am very happy youre bringing the hardbodies stories back.<br />And it seems like youre planning on developing the relationship between Linus and Jenna a bit.<br /><br />I think a bit romantic stuff and "everyday life" problems would be really nice.<br />Exspecially those problems would be a good way to work as "teasers", showing that she grew even wider and bigger without having to have a typical flexing scene.<br />I loved to read this chapter. At one point i was a little confused though, cause the change from being very insecure and disappointed about her muscles, site and gain, to her being all horny about her body came a bit too quick.<br />Just a detail i guess in the otherwise absolutely lovely story.<br /><br />I have not started on my new Monstra drawing yet, but im planning to do some sketching this weekend, and Monstra is definately on the list ^_-<br /><br />One thing i wanted to ask you about... i have an original chara on my own and wondered if i could request a very very short story or a scene description about her.<br /><br />I dont have anything in mind yet, but i pretty much can imagine that Kira is the kind of girl you like to write about ^_-<br />If youre interested, tell me... either via email (ayanamifn@web.de) or via note on deviantart.<br />Would love to brainstorm with you about ideas. Even if its just picture ideas for her, when you dont wanna write anything for her.<br /><br />Always like idea exchange with artists i like.<br /><br />Keep the good stuff up ^_^<br /><br />hope to hear from youayanamifanhttp://ayanamifan.deviantart.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-55009141923623330822010-05-05T12:55:21.043-05:002010-05-05T12:55:21.043-05:00Thanks dude.Thanks dude.Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-40589172982149134642010-05-05T12:20:22.814-05:002010-05-05T12:20:22.814-05:00This was a great chapter, keep up the great work!This was a great chapter, keep up the great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-72191898655812916112010-05-04T18:34:32.216-05:002010-05-04T18:34:32.216-05:00Good suggestions, anon. We may not get the things...Good suggestions, anon. We may not get the things you mention in the next chapter, but I'll see about putting them into future ones.Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-72515046542998299352010-05-04T18:27:32.513-05:002010-05-04T18:27:32.513-05:00I hope that in further chapters you might finaly a...I hope that in further chapters you might finaly add a little romance and not concentrate on the usual raunchy sex stuff. It is getting a bit old, reading every time of the "bulging veins leading to her sex" etc. I would also like to see some descriptive situations where she has problems with normal day stuff, because of her size, like busting doorframes, cracking walls and testing out her strength, because Linus would like to see how far she can go. Nothing super heroic and unbeleivable, but on a level of what she can benchpress and lift. Thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-91137220814282158602010-05-04T14:03:39.618-05:002010-05-04T14:03:39.618-05:00Yeah, it's a bit short. It ended up being a b...Yeah, it's a bit short. It ended up being a bridging chapter to get to the good stuff. I figured it was best to post it as is rather than wait until the webcam stuff was finished (that might've taken a while).Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-24815846932351739212010-05-04T13:53:00.388-05:002010-05-04T13:53:00.388-05:00Damned, I missed this story! I hope you continue i...Damned, I missed this story! I hope you continue it soon. Also the other ones you stoped publishing. This one was a bit short and not as descriptive as you usualy write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-27414278740639730972010-05-04T12:00:38.087-05:002010-05-04T12:00:38.087-05:00I second all of the above statements. I am glad t...I second all of the above statements. I am glad to see your back in saddle!Hatournoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-3631263042081949092010-05-04T10:21:03.827-05:002010-05-04T10:21:03.827-05:00Thanks for your encouragement, Jeremy. I don'...Thanks for your encouragement, Jeremy. I don't know what the fem-muscle fiction community would do without you!<br /><br />Ozzy - once again, love your site. I need to start posting some comments (like the recent pic of the girl unbuttoning her shirt. Awesome. How about a shot of a girl lifting the bottom of her shirt to reveal her abs?). As for Jenna wanting to screw herself, I'm hoping to get more oppurtunites to show how horny the pumped-up super girls get.Mr.Shhhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409638625757884711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-71480525919727531242010-05-04T04:33:52.745-05:002010-05-04T04:33:52.745-05:00Yes! I'm really happy to read a new chapter of...Yes! I'm really happy to read a new chapter of this fantastic story!<br />I particulary love the moment when she seems to want to fuck herself!<br />You're still a inspiration to me to write!<br /><br />OzzyOzzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550138917299947614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-430120085571683884.post-30281475685333196482010-05-03T15:05:58.841-05:002010-05-03T15:05:58.841-05:00Man, so great to see Hardbody finally make a comeb...Man, so great to see Hardbody finally make a comeback! Hardbody was probably my favorite story of yours since Battle of the Sexes stopped years before Hardbody came out, but Hardbody took that and just slaughtered it, I was waiting and hoping that you would pick Hardbody back up and now that you finally have, I can't tell you enough how awesome it is! I have always loved Jenna's obsession with growing bigger and more ripped, and now she has 2 guys who want to help her and motivate her do exactly that. Not to mention all those guys on the internet who will probably pay unreal amounts of money to see her even for 30 seconds because of her incredible her body is. Great job on this, you know me, I cannot wait to see more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com